Saturday, August 18, 2012

Une Titled

Let there be more nights like this--
Starless and uncharted
Crossing boundless territories

You've conquered my
eyes through hoops
And hooks and dreams

That have been let go

And hands that have
Never been held.

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2 comments:

  1. AmandaSeptember 17, 2012 at 6:09 AM

    Wow Carissa, this is wonderful. I think that this is probably one of your best pieces! I really enjoyed the second and last stanza. The thought of eyes being conquered with hoops, hooks, and dreams, is really riveting. And the last part says so much and really gives the reader a sense of separation and loss.

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  2. UnknownDecember 30, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    Thank you, Amanda. I appreciate your insight!

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